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Artist's Comments

I created this piece for a contest in which a rainbow must somehow be depicted. It isn't my best piece, but I am still learning. I worked hard to create this piece and am quite pleased with how it turned out!

Thank you so much to the following artists for allowing the use of their wonderful stock images:

:iconcybrea-stock: Background
:iconjlstock: Mermaids
:iconhameed: Planet

I give permission for all clubs to submit my artwork!

Critiques


:iconholly6669666:
I like how you created this fantasy environment using the mermaids and the way you positioned them is nice on the rocks, the appear like they are actually sitting there. You could make this even more convincing if you added some shadows where they are sitting by using the burn tool on the background behind them. I like the addition of the planet in the sky it coordinates in color well with the rest of the background, but the way that it was added to the image could be improved. Notice that there is a white ring around the edge of it, that is somewhat distracting, but this could be fixed and be made to look more natural and not distract from the other elements in the image. You can fix this by adding a small inner glow and a larger outer glow on the layer that the moon is on, this can be done by just double clicking on the layer and then a new window will come up and you can apply these glows from that menu. Hope that was helpful, if you ever need any help or suggestions/critiques on anything, please ask :)
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:iconj-herz:
wow, absolutely beautiful! I don't know much about this type of artwork. all i can say, is keep working!
:iconmystrawberryhouse:
this is really cool i wish i could do art like this lol
:iconscorpionlover:
Really niiiice!! :love:

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:iconandrearn5278:
Thank you very much! =D

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~Andrea H. Rimer~

"Within this wall of flesh, there is a soul."
:iconandrearn5278:
Thank you very much! It is only the fourth photomanipulation I have done. I checked out your gallery and your work is wonderful. I don't think you would have any problems doing this!

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~Andrea H. Rimer~

"Within this wall of flesh, there is a soul."
:iconandrearn5278:
Thank you very much! I just figured out how to do this type of artwork a few days ago. I am glad people are enjoying it!

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~Andrea H. Rimer~

"Within this wall of flesh, there is a soul."
:iconsjm1010:
Very nice hun! Try loading it a bit bigger so the detail can be seen!! Very nice!

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If your fingers stink don't shake my hand.
:iconandrearn5278:
Ok, I will try and do that! Thanks!

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~Andrea H. Rimer~

"Within this wall of flesh, there is a soul."
:iconmr-nerb:
Very colourful.
If you want planets....check out my gallery for loads. :-) Use them to your hearts content.
And if you want any help with these kind of pics, just shout!
.............nerb

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"Occam's Razor" - all things being equal the most obvious answer is often the truth.
:iconmystrawberryhouse:
lol thanks.. i dont no if i would know how to start on something like that.. but i may give it a try

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